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A shining vessel in waters dark
White sails proud amidst the storm
From fierce clouds, the lightning stark
mocked the glow of fire warm
 
Proud she stood to fight the wind
Her dragon tall in growing light
While thunder roared in ceaseless din
Hating the fair craft so bright
 
On she sailed in crushing waves
Towards the first of sunrise's rays
Enraged, the roiling storm gave chase
But slowly faded in the warmth of day
 
Thus she emerged in shining form
To sail in light for evermore
Never again would there be a storm
That dared to challenge the Dragon's roar.
 
A poem written hastily for a friend. And I thought I didn't have enough on DA, so here it is! Hope you like it =)
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked this a lot! A strong metre to match the strong words.

Really nice work!

I am a dummy! 
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featherling Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :hug:
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Orion159 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course!
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LoveDoesNotExist Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oeh, you are good! I like it :D
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featherling Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! =)
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buslimpan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student General Artist
It's a strong poem! I really like it :)
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featherling Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Writer
Im glad you do! =D
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Tisshh Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is incredibly well written and it flows together great. Good job.
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featherling Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks so much! =D
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Tisshh Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. I give credit when credit's due.
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